It is undeniable that environment can take a significant role for children's revolution. For this reason, some people suggest that the proper environment for raising kids is in the country side while the naysayers believe nurturing them in the city is better. In the following paragraph, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail.
There are numerous reasons for children to grow up in country side. Firstly, It is known that rural area provides the natural environment such as rivers, mountains, canals, livestock farms, fields. This atmosphere can be beneficial for children because they can develop various skills from having many opportunities to engage with the nature. For instance, kids can upgrade their motor skills when they use their muscle to collect some crops, kayak around the canal, grow plants, feed animals. Moreover, living in rural area contained of natural atmosphere can be good for health. This is because the air is fresh and pure more than in the city. Therefore, if kids grow up in this environment, they will tend to have strong immune leading to take a less prone to be sickness.
However, raising children in the city can be beneficial to their growth. In other words, urban area gives lot of opportunities for children to develop their favoured skills from having variety of courses such as art, music and dance. In addition, living in the town ,providing many facilities, can help children access arranged learning places. For example, in each month, exhibition in museums is updated so that to give in-trend knowledges and kids user can obtain variety of newest informations. Therefore, this can be useful for children to gain new experiences and also support kids' life-long leaning skills.
To summarise, both growing up in the rural area and in the city are advantageous. while raising children in countryside can upgrade their motor skills and have good heath from engaging with nature, children growing up in the city can have many opportunities to learn more various things from a variety of learning hubs
- Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefit that it will replace face - to - face education. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 73
- Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by the local farmers Would the advantages of th 73
- some people think that it is better for a child to grow up in the country side than in the city.others disagree.Discuss both views and give your own openion. 73
- These days Internet based courses have become a popular alternative to university based courses Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures Others argue that it is important to study at university Discuss both th 39
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, of course, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11869436202 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67845209212 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510385756677 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6831211407 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.470588235 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165585677775 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669819400945 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670674652533 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117328821122 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558660768207 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.