Although many people think that study from online classes are better than face-to-face class, others believe that normal lectures are more advantageous. In this essay, I will analyse both of these arguments and explain why I mostly agree with the latter viewpoint.
Looking now at the reason why online courses is important, there are a few that seems valid. The most important one is that these courses could be convenient for students. This is because students can learn from home or anywhere that they need. This could make them do not have to waste their time on journey to the university. On a top of that, it is not false to say that online courses can be economical. This means that the learners do not have a surplus expense on transportation. For example, I used to spend 100 pound per mount for catching train to my university, but when some courses had been turned to online based form, I spent just 50 pound due to study at home.
Focussing now on the factors determining why the classic lecture classrooms are still important, there are severals that are convincing. Most importantly, we can say that old tradition classes give opportunity to have real interactive activities in classroom from having face-to-face conversation and eye contact between teachers and learners. Aside from that, it could be true to say that these course provide learning atmosphere that can lead to students' enthusiasm to learn. As a result, students will have more engagement in the classroom and this can lead to improve leaning outcomes
To conclude, it can be seen that both sides have their valid reason. Nevertheless, I strongly feel that old tradition classrooms are still essential mainly because these give opportunity to have real interaction between students and teachers and create learning atmosphere overcomes the advantage of online learning to provide convenience and to be cheaper.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, nevertheless, so, still, thus, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07028753994 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77349418672 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549520766773 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3908522069 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.357142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243258508296 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869986749641 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040946576752 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138366451706 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641775352093 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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