Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by the local farmers. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Although many people consider that consuming food from local farm is better for the environment and the economy, some of them believe that it is disadvantageous. In this essay, I will discuss both of these argument and pinpoint why I mostly agree with the latter viewpoint.
Focussing now on the advantages of having food product from local farm, there are several that seem valid. The most important one is that it reduces the chance of economic growth inequality. this could be because local entrepeneur will have more profit and all of the income will not be taken by large company. As a result, the money can spread to rural area instead of having only in the city. In the other hand, it is not the fault to say that it can be good for people's health. this is because products which are delivered by farmers would be natural and organic. Therefore, people tend to have good health from eating organic food
Moving to the factors determining why consuming food transported from farm is unuseful, there are a few that are convincing. most importantly, we can say that the price would be more expensive from having transportation cost. To further explain, the local shop has to spend more money to use tuck, car, driver, gas, so that to deliver thier products to urban customers. Moreover, it could be said that transporting food from the local farm can be harmful to the environment. this is because the car will ooze the carbon to the atmosphere. As a result, the more delivered food from farm has gained, the more air pollution will have
In conclusion, we can clearly see that both sides have their strong argument. However, I strongly feel that it is more disadvantages if all of citizens consume food which are only produced from farm because it can be more expensive and effect on the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76825396825 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62162643603 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4400241785 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.133333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324310858283 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11366625476 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105644584429 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203603476206 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055159424372 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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