Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
When people have break time, they have the option to choose whether or not to use those gaps to advance their knowledge or do nothing. While there are benefits to relaxing and sleeping during those periods, I would argue that enhancing the man psychologically during leisure time is a better option.
On the one hand, resting your mind during break time consists of lots of merits. First of all, it is a judicious idea to have a break after a long and hard day’s work, for example, some people who often have busy and exhausting jobs often prefer to regain stamina between the interval periods, therefore, it would be detrimental to interfere them with minds quizzes during their free time. Secondly, many people are lazy, it is impossible to persuade them for a short game of chess. Last but not least, the human body is not a full-time capacity working machine, many diseases can be occurred such as insomnia and narcolepsy without a lack of sleep deprivation, so it is mandatory to take a despite for some moments.
On the other hand, developing minds can attain better success in this modern area which is the alternative to simultaneously achieve both domains. Most of all, reading and studying distinctive information can broaden our knowledge, hence plenty of useful data could be absorbed for later lives. Secondly, by playing games such as chess or sudoku, the ability to think and creativity could be susceptibly enlarged, it also escalates the creative power of our minds. Lastly, practicing the aforementioned hobbit regularly is another chance to get better-paid jobs, Hieu PC sets an example, he was an inquisitive child who was fond of hacking and programming when he was 6 years old, despite his misdemeanor, he is now a technical expert at National Cybersecurity and Monitoring Center with a wage to approximately a billion VND.
In conclusion, I think both the arguments have their merits. On balance, however, it seems that reading and doing puzzles during leisure time is of overriding importance due to the aforementioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ak time, they have the option to choose whether or not to use those gaps to advance their know...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02040816327 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84633524434 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620991253644 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.3620849807 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286791208814 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101847455031 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694778096539 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174043387086 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702288018015 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.