Nowadays, apart from social media, video games, sports are the most well-known genre of entertainment. Hence, there are a lot of presumptions about this category. Many people believe that team sports such as football or basketball bring more advantages to players. However, others think that individual sport like swimming or tennis is much more beneficial for athletes. In my opinion, both types of sports have their perks and exert an equal benefit to players.
First of all, playing in a team help people to develop collaboration skill because teamwork is a highly vital soft skill that everyone must have not only in daily working life but also in a team sport. For instance, If a football team has a personal style footballer who is not communicating with his teammates by non-verbal gestures, then his team has a high chance of losing the match regardless of the weak or strong components they face. Furthermore, participate in a team help to resolve problems and conflicts since a team resemble many players with different personalities. As a result, there would be at least one time of disagreement due to differences in mindset or leadership. For example, if a conflict happens in a group, every member should recognise the nature of the problem and find the resolution quickly. Otherwise, Arguments and fights may occur, disrupting the game.
On the other hand, individual sports focus on athletes' mental health and physical fitness because there is just a contestant on the playfield dealing with rivals. Unlike team sport, besides physical flexibility and power, the mentality is another crucial aspect that a competitor must bear in mind. For example, if a contestant has a weak mental condition, no matter how strong he is, there would be a possibility of losing the game if he thinks the competitor is more skilful than him. Every action he made is responsible for the result of a match, so that an athlete must fully develop muscle strength as well as a stable will.
In conclusion, every kind of sport has its perks and properties. Many people would support team sport because it helps them to socialise with teammates and gain teamwork skills. Others would prefer personal style sport so that they could balance the physical and metal elements.
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2242.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 453.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94922737307 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76244068876 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547461368653 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4756353345 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.909090909 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5909090909 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24390130249 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668525792485 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751443060763 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152974251421 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827197645782 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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