Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary life, many a person believes that team sports bring more benefits when people take part in sports such as football, whereas others suppose that individual sports, like tennis and swimming have more advantages compared to team sports. I am of the opinion that both team and individual sports contain their own advantages for players.
Should people play team sports, they will have a chance to hone their social skills, especially autistic patients. In terms of normal people, once playing team sports such as soccer, football, volleyball and so forth, they have opportunities to ameliorate their skill like teamwork and communication skills assisting them in paving the way for their career. To be specific, teamwork is developed during play time with their peers in that players must work together to adopt an appropriate strategy to win the game; therefore, they find it easy to hone these skills and apply these into their job. Furthermore, team sports may help people develop their communication skills via playing sports. For instance, once playing in a football team, they will deploy communication skills to account for a plan or instilt ideas to their peers during play time. As a result, they have a place and objects to use and hone their skills. Last but not least, team sports play an indispensable role in helping autistic patients reintegrate into society. To be specific, these patients are inclined to have a shame to contact strangers; however, only when they play team sports will they break the mental barrier hindering them and their people in society.
If people opt to play individual sports, they may promote their self- reliance. Specifically, players, especially the introvert, are devoid of confidence to confront their adversities in their life and have a chance to rectify their weakness by playing a sport, like swimming, badminton and so on. There is no denial that they may gain more confidence whenever making a spur of the moment decision while facing a problem in their game play. Above all, the more correct decisions they have, the more self- reliant they are.
To sum up, both individual and team sports bring overwhelming advantages for players depending on the aim of players once playing them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, while, as to, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62366176005 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517615176152 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0821677743 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.733333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239359141764 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998579407788 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779172893814 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183278750033 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109689741989 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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