Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A school of thought holds that participating in sports played in teams is advantageous, while an alternative stance asserts that choosing individual sports is more advisable. The purpose of this essay is to discuss both sides and explain why I would like to stay neutral in this contentious argument.
On the one hand, proponents of team-playing sports tend to point out a combination of reasons. First and foremost, the teamwork skills of players can be nurtured and developed. For instance, children who play football or basketball usually gain greater abilities to communicate and figuring out solutions with others when stumbling upon challenges and stricter discipline. Another compelling reason is to encourage healthy competitiveness. Hence, players will have a considerable and moderate amount of motivation and encouragement to do their best without unfairly hurting and harming other participants on purpose.
On the other hand, individual sports bring a host of merits as well. The primary reason is that the schedule for practicing is more flexible in comparison to that of sports teams. Therefore, the frequency and density of exercises and training can be adjusted according to the will of participants and is less likely to be interrupted. Furthermore, participants tend to receive wider recognition and attention, along with impressive benefits on their own. As a result, they are greatly invested and carefully qualified, which leads to higher quality, results, and acknowledgement.
In conclusion, both viewpoints are justifiable. Team-playing as well as individual sports have their own conveniences and helpful characteristics on balance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66135458167 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32104155273 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2095038677 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214767944194 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654254343305 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055668227182 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136132540022 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445107036957 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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