While some say that participating in team sports is advantageous, the remain distractors believes the opposite that activities which much independent such as swimming is afford us more pros. In my opinion, I favors playing sports which needs a number of members over the individual sports.
On the one hand, playing sports individually can afford us some benefits in some case.It practices and trains your self-confidence, helps participant to make sense of themselves, focuses completely on the advantages which they are having boss this ability day to day to become a more good model compare to the day before. Besides, people who evolve in independent sport certainly bear entirely the consequence of the loos or stand on the cloud nine when winning a particular competition. Chess, for instance, is a means of sports that garner attention over a wealth of continents. It requires high levels of brilliance, creation and espescially the well-being mental before the match, it is the typical sport for the individual sport. You should practice on a daily basis, put your faith on your self to get the success.
On the other hand, I would rather cooperative sports than the independent one because of some reasons. One of the most striking difference that individual sports never meet is that while non-teamwork sport require us independence; rather, the team-work sports need people to have to work altogether, mutual understanding to direct to the same purposes. Contract to the individuals, every member have the right to contribute the strategy before the match, thereby take more chace to win the match. Additionally, Having a captain in our team can encourages other member to try your best, devote all your ability to gain high achievement, the more you try to do, the more opportunites to get the glory to come nearer.
Despite both of two types of sport are all beneficial for the participant in different aspects. However, in my opinion, I prefer the team-work since it afford us a more multifaceted benefits than the other one.
- Although there is a lot of translation software available learning a language still could be advantageous To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany France Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005 67
- The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024 73
- The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 78
- Some employers are giving increased importance to employing people with good social skills in addition to good qualifications Do you agree or disagree that social skills are as important as good qualifications for success in a job 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ipating in team sports is advantageous, the remain distractors believes the opposite that ...
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Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'afforded'.
Suggestion: afforded
...ch much independent such as swimming is afford us more pros. In my opinion, I favors p...
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Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'favor'
Suggestion: favor
...s afford us more pros. In my opinion, I favors playing sports which needs a number of ...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...an afford us some benefits in some case.It practices and trains your self-confiden...
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Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'day to'.
Suggestion: day to
...which they are having boss this ability day to day to become a more good model compare to the...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'understanding directing'.
Suggestion: understanding directing
...ople to have to work altogether, mutual understanding to direct to the same purposes. Contract to the i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09821428571 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95687631793 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0099041001 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.769230769 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285175079782 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987208822861 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375118970793 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179942455956 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298164629529 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.