SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT IT IS MORE BENEFICIAL TO TAKE PART IN SPORTS WHICH ARE PLAYED IN TEAMS, LIKE FOOTBALL,WHILE OTHER PEOPLE THINK THAT TAKING PAR IN INDIVIDUAL SPORTS, LIKE TENNIS(OR)SWIMMING, IS BETTER. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
Few people in the world are thinking that it is very useful to play in team sports like football, basketball etc but remaining people are saying that individual sports like tennis or swimming are quite beneficial compared to group teams. According to me, single handed games are important to that person by bringing popularity in the world and they can show their talent as individual person to the society.
Firstly, group teams like cricket, football plays a key role in the world. let us consider if a new person joined in a team for playing then that person should handle pressures and that person should be free to interact with team members. if the person want popularity in the society by playing game in a team that is very hard and impossible to recognize him until he become a best player in that specific field. otherwise if person is in a team should handle all the pressure situations while playing and should prove their worth in that particular team by giving the best and smart play. one more major drawback is the person should be under the guidance of captain and also decision cannot individually and by considering each persons opinion in the team the decision will take progress. while, playing football or cricket team spirit is important.
Secondly, single handed games like badminton, swimming and tennis are some of the individual games in which every person has chance to play. the advantages for this games are each person can take decision quickly with in a second. for example,pv sindhu who is a badminton player when she is playing opposite to any other nation if she is in losing side the immediately she take decision that she used to change her game strategies by implementing the smart play in the game which will give beneficial to her. mostly, the sport which is played by a single person can become a popular with in a few seconds after winning the game. if the talent is their in that person and the person proved the worth and also confidence is most important and it is unbeatable to stop the person by growing day by day. the main disadvantage in this sport is if the person take immediate decision and taht decision did not work perfectly and if the person is in loosing side then every people will blame that person who played individually, with in a short time the total popularity, carieer everything will demolish.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76997578692 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48419306175 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457627118644 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8019700514 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.714285714 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192737744973 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789615319352 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855751944054 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161574294969 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762910575982 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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