Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries. While other think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the salad days of millennium, the society is polarised into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that some masses believe that it is not essential to visit foreign country to learn about other countries. However other folks think that it is not urgent to go abroad because all the information can be collected with the help of television and the internet. Different people have their distinct mindset. The following paragraphs would shed light on both the approaches before making a final note.
To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favour. first and foremost is that computers can never replace real places. computer shows a fake images about another country but natural wonders that we see in a real.As a result, if people can visit actual place. they can also touch with our fingertips and set a real image in our mind. Secondly, when we make a trip to a foreign country. we get some exercise. Consequently, which is good to our health and we generally go with family and friends and enjoy a lot.
Shifting towards the second school of thought, every person can not afford high expenses of airways tickets and accommodation in hotel. Hence, they would like to get information from internet and television about another countries. These devices provide accurate results for human beings and it is cheaper comparison than actual travel to abroad. Moreover, nowadays, people are very busy and have no time. Therefore, every person have become workaholic in the rat race of money and material wealth.
having discussed the arguments and counter arguments. I would like to infer that although people learn about tradition and culture of other countries, we also get a chance to expand the culture of our country. To justify my state of mind, there is an instance of Mahatma ghandi Ji visited many countries to spread their own culture in foreign countries.
Hammering the last nail, I personally feel that the experience of actually going to a foreign country can never be compared to just seeing those places, sitting at home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96296296296 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52542850648 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598290598291 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.210450112 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227732284866 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567605864976 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067228475529 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11752986229 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784843510865 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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