Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that having a permanent job is better than enjoying the job.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary of society, it is generally believed that people's satisfaction levels with their job is considered more crucial compared job security. However other people hold an opposition belief against this. Personally, I totally agree with the former statement.
For a variety of reasons, job satisfaction plays an important role in a person's career. First, for some individuals, other than salary, they only go to work to seek happiness at work place. This means that having a satisfactory work environment will boost employee’s job efficiency. Therefore, once people are happy with their job, so they complete their given assignment from their superiors. As a result, these people can achieve the ultimate goals of organization. For example, in Vietnam, a number of young employees who come from wealthy background only work if the job brings satisfaction for them. Hence, they will change their job until they are able to find a suitable workplace, which should bring happiness to them.
Apart from the abovementioned practical concerns, there are also individuals who go to work because of its security. In other words, they are motivated to work because they need to have a stable job in order to support their family. Therefore, they might need to earn a stable source of income to afford several basic expenses, such as accommodation, food or even tuition fees of their children. As a result, having a permanent job is more important for these employees even if they feel dissatisfied with some internal factors at work place, such as colleagues. For instance, some employees who have to deal with a number of financial burdens are willing to sacrifice their happiness at work in return of a fixed source of income.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that job satisfaction is more important than job security.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22666666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95609351829 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.840708948 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29321013678 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109125067011 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961668509674 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229058166194 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720677738501 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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