Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, an abundance of people agree that work satisfaction is more crucial than employment security. Having a sustained occupation is seen as something essential, thus other people tend to ignore job excitement. Personally I think that people need to consider many aspects when they take a job opportunity such as satisfaction, security, and sustainability.
The employment satisfaction measures that the work environment is obviously worth surviving. It shows that people gain valuable advantages related to supportive workmates, work security, an excellent boss, various insurance benefits, and many more considerations. Sometimes, workers are pushed with huge workloads which lead them to lose a job excitement. For instance, Indonesians tend to choose a civil servant occupation due to the long lasting benefits like stable salaries, incentives, pension guarantees as well. All those advantages trigger the worker to stay in their job permanently without realizing that they are not being keen on their occupation anymore. Therefore, the percentage of resignation for public sector employees are fewer than private company employees
As far as I’m concerned, occupation excitement is a temporary thing that people can not be pushed to enjoy anymore. However, the worker's performance will be impacted since they lost their responsibility and loyalty. The worst possibility that may occur is related to employment resistance in that they tend to ignore the organization changes, policies, and rules because they already earned some continuous benefits.
To conclude, an abundance of people tend to engage in a long lasting occupation for extraordinary benefits without realizing that the job is not suitable for their proficiency. This preference often led the worker to be ignorant since they are no longer enjoying the job anymore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...e pushed to enjoy anymore. However, the workers performance will be impacted since they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67509025271 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12909560364 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58844765343 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3103565241 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.923076923 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236867960809 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852877474848 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622358738185 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157945504241 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943756979381 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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