Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are many people who argue that it is more important to enjoy one’s job than to work for a permanent job that keeps them unsatisfied. Meanwhile, others think that having an unenjoyable job is not necessary for as long as it offers security. These two viewpoints will be further discussed in this essay before the writer renders an opinion.
On the one hand, job satisfaction offers a lot of importance in the workforce. With workers satisfied with their current work, it increases retention in the labor force. For instance, if one desired to be a grade school teacher, despite mediocre salary or load work, a teacher would still remain in the job because it makes him/her fulfill his/her passion for teaching. Another point is, according to statistics, among fresh graduates, those who chose their job preference were most likely to keep their jobs for a minimum of 2 years than those who chose jobs according to demand or salary, who left their employers before 6 months. Thus, individuals who are satisfied with their jobs are most likely to stay employed and could avoid moving from one job to another.
On the other hand, people view that security is more necessary than pursuing one’s preference in terms of employment. This is somehow true because a secure job offers financial stability. As in the case of parents, who provide the basic needs of their children, it is very risky not to have a steady income. Without financial stability in the family, different problems will stem that would most likely lead to unhealthy relationships between members. Thereby, one needs a good-paying job to satisfy physiological needs.
Undoubtedly, nowadays, sometimes it’s hard to find a job that offers both satisfaction and stability. However, in my viewpoint, it’s important for individuals to find a job they are interested in, for as long as it can provide money for basic needs. I believe that it is not necessary to work for a high-paying job that does not give a sense of fulfillment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96439169139 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75632038789 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548961424332 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1384315672 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374896530899 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13046800489 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988463382445 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243461667112 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835963338518 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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