In your opinion, should young people choose their profession, or should their parents choose for them ?
There is a huge debate on whether youngsters should choose their career path or their parents should choose for them. Personally, I strongly believe that making independent choices is very important for young people in both their professional and personal life.
On the one hand, parents' guidance has huge assistance on the future career paths of students. Firstly, there are some occupations that consider beneficial and prestigious, from parents' perspectives, than other jobs. For example, medical and engineering fields offer better job opportunities and better salaries; therefore, these professions provide better quality of life for young people who follow that path. Secondly, it is frequently stressful for students to make a decision on their best suited profession, as a result of the lack of life experiences and self-knowledge. Moreover, some students change their major at collage after the first semester or maybe even before as they cannot decide what exactly they desire to be in the future. Definitely, in this situation, Parents' advices come very handy for their choice of occupation because parents would have a better perspective about life. Thus, they will have the ability to know the requirements for various jobs which will also create a prosperous future for their children.
On the other hand, it is preferable for young people to have the freedom to choose a career where their strengths and passions combine. Furthermore, individuals, who choose their professions independently, will clearly get self-fulfillment and job satisfaction. Unquestionably, allowing teenagers to express themselves and explore their capabilities will give them a sense of ownership and responsibility. Evidently, students who set foot in their favorite university and study subjects that they love are most likely to achieve success in their educational, professional, and indeed personal life.
In conclusion, youngsters should choose their occupation freely and parents are encouraged to support and help them; however, parents should play a guidance role to help their children reach success without forcing them to take a specific path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60244648318 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03335859904 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581039755352 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1242398397 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.857142857 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.483592273124 0.244688304435 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165369498585 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142873053381 0.0667982634062 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.348152278341 0.151304729494 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122450909462 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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