Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the globalization process, we have witnessed the development in industrialisation from many countries in the world. This would cause a dispute about whether money from the government or private company's budget should be spent equally on building or upgrading schools and hospitals. There are scores of people who assert that the development of a country depends on the number of lavish and massive building constructions. By contrast, money is supremely believed to be invested in hospital and school infrastructures by other people. From my perspective, money is necessary to be invested in both ideas of the statement.
On the one hand, there are several rationales to acknowledge that constructions of buildings are worthy to be invested in. One of the most compelling reasons is that a country with a large number of modern buildings is consistently considered a standard of a developed country. For instance, many industrial countries such as The United States of America, England, France have a variety of buildings with splendid architecture and modern technique. Subsequently, those constructions are considered to be the representation of a country’s development. Another substantial reason is that pouring money into buildings is a method for unemployment. Due to the fact that the rate of citizens who have not had a stable job is constant a concern for the national authority. Therefore, the increasing number of towers or building constructions are the opportunity for workers to take advantage and create their own paths.
On the other hand, there is a justifiable reason to believe that money should be spent in school and hospital facilities. In particular, education and medicine are both indispensable fields to be concerned by the government and residents in every country. According to the majority of people’s assessments, investing money in education and medicine stands for a radical thought, and represents a country's civilization. Indeed, from a recent research depicts that a country with money allocated to schools and hospitals is likely to have a surge percentage of the economy, higher than the average proportion of the world's .
In conclusion, I assess that pouring money into the development of buildings and enhancing the infrastructure’s quality of schools as well as hospitals are equally essential. Therefore, I suggest that the government ought to take action to manage the expenditure from the government’s budget and other private enterprise investments, in terms of meeting the requirement of constructing buildings, along with schools and hospitals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n for the national authority. Therefore, the increasing number of towers or build...
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...erprise investments, in terms of meeting the requirement of constructing building...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2204.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46898263027 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36747942163 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488833746898 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9759037894 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.444444444 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3888888889 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273449788232 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927240454898 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731199765858 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171963740108 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552370009909 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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