Some people think that media news has become much more influential in people's lives today and it is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?
In today’s world, mass media news is increasingly affecting the viewers’ perceptions and opinions. Thus, some people think that it may bring a negative impact on the society in general. In my view, while the influence of news is indeed significant, this development might deliver some benefits.
To begin with, there are several reasons why individuals say such influence from media news is unfavorable to the society. Since the majority of public publishers are being controlled strictly by governments nowadays, there will be a number of articles with untrue facts or information posted. Therefore, a large proportion of residents might change their way of thinking and lean towards the authority side in national problems. In other words, propagandas implemented in media news might turn citizens against each other, which leads to a reversed development of a nation. In addition, the plethora of information from sources and means such as paper-based and online newspapers keeps piling up every day. As a result, readers may be frustrated with different ideas and contents of the same matter.
However, the aforementioned setbacks show only one aspect of the influence of news. Aside from political articles, there are plenty of useful information on the newspapers that viewers can absorb and use to make personal decisions. For example, researches and surveys in distribution problem can help to convince people to change their mind when deciding to settle in areas with high density. Furthermore, by reading from many information sources, individuals will have different opinions to argue about matters and reduce the bias towards a single idea. As long as these arguments are righteous and reasonable, they will inevitably make the society grow in many aspects.
In conclusion, while media news is more influential in people’s lives, this development still proves to have positive effects on the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... newspapers that viewers can absorb and use to make personal decisions. For example...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, in my view, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43521594684 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97383578849 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624584717608 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0078177982 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.066666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9333333333 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192295124752 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617407525936 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776497460864 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148251029387 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103782967488 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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