Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a common fallacy that women are less competitive than men. While some people advocate for the superiority of men compared to their female counterparts, I believe that both genders have their own merits, and if they are given equal opportunities, both of them can become successful. In other words, no one outperforms another, and both genders are equally competitive.
I can understand why some people believe that males are naturally more competitive than females. Most of the time, women are compared by men based on some old attitudes towards genders. They think that women can be only successful in housework, and their main role of them is to be a good wife or mother at home. It is thought that women are weak creatures who can only decorate the house or cook different types of food. However, in modern life, this view is no longer acceptable because of the achievements that women have gained in different contexts, ranging from science to sport to politics. There have always been many females in the world who have been very famous for their rights and have shown their abilities and power in comparison with their male counterparts. Many ladies have illustrated how they can overcome their rivals by their competitive attitudes.
It is a fact that women are as just as competitive as men. However, due to different social situations and prejudices, women usually cannot have a dominant role in competitions compared to men. Unlike men, women have different responsibilities as wife, daughter and mother. These roles in turn can stop them from continuing their career goals or powering their sense of competitiveness. Females have some biological and psychological duties that most men confess that they cannot cope with, such as giving birth and raising children. Women are the most devoted creatures in the world who usually accept to sacrifice their career and success for the sake of their families. Also, in some developing countries, we can see that women are not allowed to progress just because people believe that women are not as strong as men, and they do not have enough abilities to perform big activities. So, such individuals get the rights of women and decide to limit them. As a result, if females do not participate in competitions or other competitive fields, it does not mean that they are inferior to men. We have to see that most of the time, behind any successful man, there is a supportive wife or mother or even daughter.
In conclusion, in my view, women are as competitive as men if they are given a chance. If they are let have enough time for themselves like men, they can also prove themselves in various fields.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2218.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 453.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89624724062 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74337076677 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476821192053 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.9 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.140576524 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.818181818 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5909090909 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231700637139 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911478953759 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837036251123 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149651345366 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381468996203 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2218.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 453.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89624724062 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74337076677 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476821192053 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.9 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.140576524 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.818181818 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5909090909 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231700637139 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911478953759 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837036251123 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149651345366 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381468996203 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.