Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Nowadays while physical strength is believed to be the decisive factor that led to the victory in sport, many other people support the idea that mental toughness plays a more important role. From my perspective, both the psychological and physical side of an athlete should not be underestimated
On the one hand, physical fitness is a prerequisite for joining a sport. First and foremost, most of the traditional sport is the competition of corporal strength. This is irrefutable that numerous sports require stamina, agility or flexibility. Weightlifter, which brute strength is the key role to the overall success, can be a good case in point. In the second place, since the sportspeople have high-intensity trainnings frequently, an extraordinary bodily strength is essential. Illustration of this is the professional athletes who always exercises approximately ten or even twelve hours daily. Furthermore, physical toughness helps them avoid unintended injuries during practicing or competition which can ruin their careers.
Nevertheless, it is the mental factor that defines how well the sportsman's performance will be. The professional sports competitors devote themselves to willpower and psychological preparation carefully to gain a sense of confidence and calm regardless of the great pressure to overcome themselves and take advance the definitive opportunity. This is shown by there are several champions losing themselves and being defeated by the inferior opponents. Another reason is that mental strength keeping them away from social catastrophe. Practicing in high pressure is not a comfortable activity, and the athlete without an iron will tend to be relinquished and fell into drunk or using drugs. Mental toughness is responsible for building up their resistant to boredom and exhaustion and keep moving forward while their body suffers from fatigue
To summarize, while extraordinary physical strength is taken for granted during practices and competitions in traditional sport, the mental toughness is the decisive factor to keep the athletes in shape and prevent them from involving in social evils
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, so, well, while, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62732919255 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1934950376 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.9549198763 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.428571429 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180608056215 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577647333725 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662373800337 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118478618843 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559901239645 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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