Some people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries, shops and on public transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some debated that electronic device should be prohibited in public areas such as libraries centre or transportation system on the ground. This may be considered disturbances from notification or bright screen. From my perspective, smart mobile should be widely allowed in public facilities.
On the one hand, allowing mobile phones might assist travellers, customer and learners in public areas. In fact that some risks occur to visitors experience in the shortage of employees without any assistance or containing viruses in the transmission of money during the outbreak. In these cases, mobile phones are being accessed to the Internet which could be addressed anything goes wrong immediately such as look for essential information are being not to lose the road or scan QR code to reduces infection in the community. Instead of borrowing books in the library, the learner is being approached with a huge of knowledge available on the mobile platform without going anyplace.
On the other hand, mobile phone are multi-functional that permits turn to silent or vibrate, in some cases, it may be licensed to use in emergency such as accident in public places. First of all, it undeniable that sometime caused annoying to others with ringtone or messages notification. As is mentioned, if is sudden accident, mobile will easily get in touch with whole family wherever they are.
- Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
- The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make co
- The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make co
- Some people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries shops and on public transport To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so, in fact, such as, first of all, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24886877828 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92139536688 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642533936652 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1844703011 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275836888309 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103553761747 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610744900688 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18633602066 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522167442912 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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