Being famous has advantages and disadvantages , discuss and give your opinion
famous is defined as the state in which one becomes well known among the different categories of people and communities. there are both positive and negative aspect associated with it. this essay depicts the various advantages and disadvatanges on being renowned.
Firstly, the famous people are praised in all the places. they are almost discussed over the social networking sites, news and media which leads to the economic benefit and maintained living standard. Likewise, they are asked for autographs all the time whenever they travel to various places. this will ultimately lead to the peaceful mind and mingling with the society easily. they are loved and respected by the public. As a result, the life becomes more serene, calmed and energizing.
With the advantages, there are various disadvantages also, they need a lot of money to maintain themselves. To maintain themselves, they need a lot of work which results in heavy work load. On the other hand, if they are incapable of getting works, the life becomes very difficult. As a result of this state, it may lead to economic burden and even depression. For example: A famous Nepalese actor, who was the leading personality in 19s becomes depressed as a result of deprived work.
Hence, being famous is everyone's desire but to challenge is bad aspects , is not everyone's business. Therefore, people needs to embrace the popularity and should have strong willpower to cope of with the undesirable circumstances inorder to live a healthy and tension free life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, likewise, may, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16465863454 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73401097291 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598393574297 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.080335454 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.375 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106863480597 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339399107151 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450184500445 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679565378826 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295418501875 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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