Some people think that in the modern world, getting old is entirely bad. Others, however, think that life of elderly in the modern world is much better than it was in the past. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Getting old is an eternal topic among human beings, especially in such a modern world now. Some people think it seems terrible to be an old man or woman, while others believe that old people can live a better life in modern society, compared with the past. I agree with the latter one.
For those who think there is no good for growing older, they may have the following reasons. First, older people are less popular than younger people in the job market. They may not be energetic enough due to the old body, and they may even become easier to forget things as being older. This means it is more difficult for them to make money for a high-quality life. Second, their action ability is drained so that they are not able to join plenty of activities, such as hiking and bungee jumping, or even just a long-distance trip. The life of elderly may be less colorful as the result of this factor.
Nevertheless, as life conditions getting better and better, especially for the old people, the average life span has been increased a lot over the past decades. Most previous deadly diseases are easily to be cured now, and the elders are no longer need to worry too much about their health as before. Not only they have the chance to live a healthy life, but also it is possible for them to live a colorful life. New technologies enable them to do numerous enjoying things, which are unimaginable before. They can see beautiful sceneries at home through the Internet. They can have delicious food at home transmitted by modern vehicles. They can even chat with a robot at home when they feel alone due to the artificial intelligence.
In conclusion, although it may cause some problems when people getting older, with the advanced technology and care from the society, the life of the elderly will become better and better.
- Some people think that in the modern world getting old is entirely bad Others however think that life of elderly in the modern world is much better than it was in the past Discuss both views and give your opinion 93
- Some people think that in the modern world getting old is entirely bad Others however think that life of elderly in the modern world is much better than it was in the past Discuss both views and give your opinion 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 638, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at home transmitted by modern vehicles. They can even chat with a robot at home when...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67080745342 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40906528353 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7616715486 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4705882353 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21830173996 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656236266533 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728934547069 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152240620073 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811110910968 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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