Getting old is a natural stage for all human beings. Some people will see it as a bad thing along with physical restraint and change of appearance. Whereas, the other argued that the elderly in the modern generation can have a better life quality. In the following essay, both sides of view will be examined and given by my personal opinion on this matter.
First of all, many mid-aged adults believe that ageing will bring them burdens in terms of health conditions and earning capacity. Many elderly are suffering from different diseases, for example, knee pain and organ failure, which might lead to a more serious condition. Furthermore, the elderly aged above 65 needs to retire according to the law. Employers are unlikely to hire this group of people because they have to pay more for medical benefits and insurance while the salary rate is sometimes higher, compared with the youths.
However, living in this generation, although the abovementioned circumstances still exist, the social supports by the government and organisations are more comprehensive. Hospitals and healthcare systems are developed to handle the growing population of old people. For example, care centres are designed to serve underprivileged elderly and elderly who lives alone. Moreover, there are many local amenities provided by non-profit organisations, such as local centres, where they will regularly host leisure and educational events, for instance, teaching them how to use smartphones.
Generally speaking, despite the change of body conditions can not be avoided when you get older, benefits and welfares from the modern society are doing good to maintain certain life qualities of the elderly. Therefore, the elderly in this era are living much better than in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30604982206 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7894772119 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654804270463 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8260238536 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17159240747 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591330761834 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590732724462 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110830202459 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824985126339 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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