Getting old is a natural stage for all human beings. Some might not look forward to their later lives because of the changes in both health and appearance. On the other hand, many people can rest assured about their elderly lives when the conditions in today's world are much better than in the past. In the following essay, both views will be deeply discussed and concluded with my own opinion on this matter.
First of all, being young will undoubtedly allow you to do more things than being old. It is understandable why many adults think that getting old is completely bad. Not only do the changes in health prevent them from some of their adventurous hobbies, such as hiking, parachuting, etc., but the fear of missing out on new fun in the modern world also contributes a large part to their point of view. On a larger scale, some people might be afraid that they will be a burden to their families and society when they become elderly.
However, not a small number of people, on the other hand, embrace their aging process with grace. They argue that the elderly can totally live comfortably with the many amenities that the modern world provides. With improved living conditions, the lifespan of human beings in general increases a lot, and there is no need to be afraid of being old.
In conclusion, I think that aging is an unavoidable process for all of us, and instead of getting insecurities about what will definitely happen, we should all live our lives to the fullest and head towards the future with no regrets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...en they become elderly. However, not a small number of people, on the other hand, embrace thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, i think, in conclusion, in general, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69259259259 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40491323789 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0284775733 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.583333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239412744266 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871662671723 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613411819244 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137678926197 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747188705507 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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