In this contemporary era, getting old is completely unpleasant although, other humans think that living of senior citizens is much easier now than it was earlier. The essay would shade light on the valid stand points in the subsequent paragraphs.
On the one hand, in this globalization world getting aged is worst, rather than the past years because technology is getting advanced day by day and some people might feel hard to adapt advancement subsequently, this has immensely affected their routine life along with, they also feel left out from this modern world. In fact, while talking to teenagers they hesitate because of generation gap. For instance, even my grandparents sometimes feel stall before asking me about smartphone features.
On the other hand, some human beings trust technological improvement is beneficial for old people. One of the welcoming feature of this world is medical innovation has helped to cure diseases like diabetes, tuberculosis, cancer with the support of modern and computerized instruments ultimately ease out the pain and make a life better one. These types of medical improvement were not available in the past they did not have any option but to live painful and helpless life. According to a Research of Oxford University, they have found in this modern era senior citizens live more healthy life because of clinical advancement rather than the past.
According to my perspective, it has been seen that medical advance system has bettered their life, irrefutably I believe not in this case. Aged people trying very hard to maintain life in this rapid changes which affect them significantly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'Research'.
Suggestion: Research
...painful and helpless life. According to a Research of Oxford University, they have found i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for instance, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22727272727 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76700850887 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9061770963 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.454545455 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280410056181 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886021338454 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734496317851 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161094566164 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112859839917 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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