Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In this era, it is controversial whether people are becoming more reliant on each other or tend to do everything independently. Although both views of thought possess a degree of accuracy, I strongly believe that people have gradually drifted apart
On the one hand, the increasing level of dependence may be a result of globalisation. In fact, the co-operations between nations have been growing unprecedentedly and many developing countries have depended on the investment and support from the first world for many decades. In addition, some careers are indispensable since they provide essential materials to other jobs. As a result, many people will have to suffer from unemployment when one of these occupations vanish. As an example, restaurants can not run if there is no supply of food from farmers
On the other hand, others argue that individuals' disconnection has been seriously higher than ever. The general living standard, as well as the minimum wages of a vast majority of people, have radically increased. Therefore, they can totally handle their issues or take care of themselves in a much easier way. Moreover, the advancement of technology and the Internet also facilitate the method of seeking for answers or solutions to tackle particular problems. For instance, in the past, most students relied on their professors in order to absorb more advice or measures, which promote their performances. However, in the present day, most of their problems can be solved with access to the Internet
To conclude, as the world is getting increasingly globalised, many people believe that we are way more dependent on others. Nonetheless, I endorse the view that people have become more independent due to the higher income they earn and the exponential growth in the Internet users
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...that people have gradually drifted apart On the one hand, the increasing level of...
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... On the other hand, others argue that individuals disconnection has been seriously higher...
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...exponential growth in the Internet users
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in fact, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23875432526 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99048830766 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626297577855 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1771232094 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.166666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284223048776 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914032592458 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715021726104 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186227610969 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953116597003 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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