The charts show the percentage of people working in different sectors in town A and B in two years 1960 and 2010
1960 and 2010.
The given pie chart illustrates the differences in employment distribution across 3 distinctive categories in two town over a 50-year period.
Overall, it can be observed that the employment opportunities in the manufacturing field rose substantially in both places in comparision with the two others, which witnessed working percentage decline noticeably
Regarding town A, it was sales that allocated the most in 1960 with 41%, other careers like manufacturing and services had the pretty close percentages of workers which was around 30%. While in 2010, manufacturing began to be the most popular sector with 64% of total worker, higher than that in 1960 35%. The percentage of people working in sales and services just dropped to nearly half of it was in 1960, respectively 20% and 16%.
When it comes to town B, sales had a major role throughout a period of 50 years. Specifically, the ratio allocated to this job was account the most of both 2 charts, though there was a dramatical decrease, with 70% in 1960 and 53% in 2010. Besides, manufacturing only attract 10% workers in 1960, however, this figure went up significantly more than twice as higher in 1960 with 25% in 2010. While the proportion in citizens working in services keep remainable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed working percentage decline noticeably Regarding town A, it was sales that allo...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ice as higher in 1960 with 25% in 2010. While the proportion in citizens working in s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07582938389 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99921000657 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582938388626 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.009198326 43.030603864 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321525167771 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138321178276 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802086787982 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168091480347 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487944995841 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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