Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Today, people presume that we tend to live on our own in a development society while someone believes that human’s life should connect broadly to one another. In my opinion, I agree with the second statement.
There are two reasons why people think that we are more independent. Firstly, because of the growth of information technology, people can share their feeling with artificial online software. For example, Facebook offers its users an app that can identify users’ pain, and give some advice to them. Therefore, more and more people are attracted to the virtual world and do not care about communication in real lives which is the basic instinct of humans. Secondly, people used to do with each other household choir which now are done by intelligent machines, so people can easily live on their own with helping modern technology.
By contrast, I believe that people, nowadays, are going to live in a wider connection with others. On the one hand, more and more organizations collaborate with another to develop their advantages together. For instance, today, supermarkets deeply depend on to logistic companies which help these supermarkets deliver goods to consumers in the fastest way. On the other hand, modern buyers tend to choose and buy everything on the Internet, so some stores have to create a link with some web sites to help them to introduce their products. Therefore, this is the reason why local shops tend to cooperate with Amazon to sell more merchandise.
In conclusion, people in modern society can live on their own or depend on others, in my viewpoint, I totally agree with the following opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05166051661 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75424116942 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586715867159 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9400996525 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30029241209 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104212855198 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862865951548 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171123727619 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724511840526 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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