Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement.
Government investment has been a topic of hot debate. Some individuals argue that these resources should be used in arts such as music and theatre because of social reasons. Nonetheless, in my opinion, it is completely justified that state must allocate most of its budget on public services due to numerus benefits.
There are a number of reasons as to why government ought to spend more money on public services. One clear reason comes from the facts that public services such as schools, police and health services provide benefit for all. When the state invests more money in these services, the public will get better education, security and improve in their wellbeing. These issues have a positive impact on people life and increase their productivity, which is going to reflect in the overall people’s life.
Another reason stems from the fact that increasing government’s funding in the public services will improve people’s quality of life. Many of public sector workers like teachers, polices and nurses are receiving payment less than inflation rate increase. This situation, which is delivered from a significant cut from government, puts peoples’ lives at more risk and makes them have a miserable life condition. As a result, people in power should increase public services’ budget to end years of austerity and eliminate in-work poverty.
In conclusion, an increasing concern for many people around government funding will continue as some people would argue that it is better to fund more in the arts. Nevertheless, I firmly believe that it is more beneficial to all if the state invests in public services.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...usterity and eliminate in-work poverty. In conclusion, an increasing concern for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2803030303 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87191164422 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594696969697 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9959844965 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20099820976 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776168775552 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486474638169 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125166236544 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329232917242 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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