Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed by some people that investment in creating technological marvels to explore space is unjustified and there are other ways to allot public budget. I mostly object to the point of view as technological applications from the journeys to space can be utilized to merit humanity, albeit they may be pricey.
Cultivating technologies for researching space helps enhance living standards of the earth denizens and secure the future of mankind. It is not uncommon for astronauts testing sprouts of variety of plants in space without influence of gravity. Given the outcomes of such experiments, people can create new types plants with higher productivity and quality. Those vegetations can be brougt back to earth and harnessed to improve crops; with more produce from those haversts, humans’ quality of life is raised accordingly. Additionally, as living conditions on earth are deteriorating due to human and objective factors such as pollution, land erosion, clamities, space exploration may hold the key to the survival of humanity in years to come. If space explorers can open the gateway to planets that are able to accommodate conditions sustaining life, when the earth become unhabitable people can simply migrate to those planets and keep on living.
Admittedly, expenditures allocated for venturing into the cosmic are daunting, and such resources can be used for education, healthcare or battling porverty. However, governments already pay regularly for those priorities and when space projects succeed, gains from those experiments will be enormous which compensate for the initial allocations.
In summary, I somewhat disagree with the view that investing in exploring the universe is unnecessary and spending should be diverted to other targets. Even though they take large sum of resources at first, the success of the undertakings will safeguard the existence and improve the welfare of human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, however, if, may, so, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45819397993 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98230258375 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9168842464 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157491352143 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612262378555 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449302016298 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948701851072 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348261250084 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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