Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree.
In this contemporary era, few humans opine that majority of the significant thing about being wealthy person it offers them to help people below poverty line. As I am concerned I will go partially with the statement.
The reason why I agree with this statement is that the people paying taxes to the higher authorities must be used for providing basic amenities to the poor people. Secondly, if individual helps unhealthy families then he get great name and fame in the world because every member of the family stands with him in any type of situation. Furthermore, it do not let our country suffer from poverty and bad family background. For example a famous sports personality sachin tendulkar pay 15% money every year to the charities in Maharashtra as well as in all over the world.
On the other hand, it depends upon person mentality few people misuse the cash they do not give proper and exact salary according to the work done to the staff working under them that leads to crime rate. Apart from that, for the young effluents these types of people give bad impression as former one say their parents to buy luxury cars, huge houses and branded clothes.
All in all, we should not do discrimination it must be necessary for wealthy person to help poor people in every type of situation by giving money so that they can also fulfill their dreams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, apart from, as for, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74789915966 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45842486874 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659663865546 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9957473985 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.555555556 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2222222222 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219705868914 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788484987593 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061120197393 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1310622262 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224221922561 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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