Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Some people hold that the priority of wealthy people is to help other people who are relatively disadvantaged. As far as I am concerned, this is a groundless standpoint.
Admittedly, wealthy people are frequently asked to offer aid to those suffering poverty and to help the whole society achieve common prosperity, which becomes a conventional rule imposed on rich people. Such a conventional rule, however, may not suggested in any formal legislation. Therefore, from the perspective of rich people, providing help to other people represents merely an expectation of the general public rather than the standard of legality. In other words, wealthy people do not necessarily engage in philanthropy. In addition, the obligation for rich people to help the impoverished population, if coming into effect, may risk violating wealthy people's right in handling their own assests. Such violation of basic human rights runs counter to our ethical standards and thus, should be avoided.
Another point that should be taken into consideration is that the disadvantaged population may not necessarily seek help from wealthy people. Instead, they can be gain support from governments that are obliged to provide pension to people under poverty and bridge the wealth gap. Additionally, unlike philanthropists who donate as much as they want, governments tend to carry out meticulous investigations on the extent of poverty for each family, along with flawless data analysis, and then make a rational decision on the amount of pension provided to each family, thus decreasing the possibility of unfair allocation of pension.
To sum up, it is inappropriate to opine that the most important task for rich people is to help other people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...represents merely an expectation of the general public rather than the standard of legality. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, in addition, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37867647059 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06058834482 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.6388990901 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.916666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224525807394 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090488132289 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700590904778 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15807505959 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537956701706 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.