In this day and age, a number of residents reckon that the news has no interaction with the regular life of people. Therefore, it is not worth your time to read newspapers and watch TV news syllabuses. From my perspective, I somewhat disagree with this point of view because although reading newspapers or watching the news may be pointless, there is still a close connection between news and people’s lives for the following reasons.
On the one hand, there are some explanations for why people refuse to obtain the news. Generally, news produces news that captures viewers’ attention since the human brain reacts disproportionately to different types of information. Scandalous, shocking, or people-based news, which often holds little value, stimulates us and consumes a large amount of our time although we barely learn anything useful out of them. For instance, the news about celebrities’ daily lives or famous people’s toxic scandals does not affect most of us. However, a massive number of people, especially the youngsters, still pay attention to that type of news despite its uselessness in their daily lives.
On the other hand, whereas many citizens argue that we should not let the news draw our attention due to its wasteful time, I still believe the news still has a strong interaction with our formal lives. For one, the news plays an indispensable role in human’s lives due to plenty of useful up-to-date information such as weather forecasts or political news which can be major factors that affect our lives a lot. Because of that, having access to daily news is a must to be well informed about what is going on in the world and to be equipped with specialized knowledge for conducting further scientific research. Furthermore, those who work as scientists are always in need of updated information from news reports about various fields. These range from education to economics and healthcare. For example, news about the current coronavirus has pushed researchers all over the world to compete 24/7 in inventing a vaccine against it.
To conclude, in spite of the fact that the news might be unworthy for our time owing to some of their pointless content, I firmly disagree that news is totally meaningless to our lives because there is still various news that is really informative to our daily life and we should keep up with it to be aware of the current state of affairs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 464, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... that, having access to daily news is a must to be well informed about what is going on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00248138958 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81461122366 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553349875931 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.3942040487 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.4 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8666666667 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373129737261 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139067478569 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751105195031 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254282471361 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711417837385 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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