Some people think that news has no connection to people’s lives, and therefore, they consider it a waste of time to read news in newspapers or watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are opposing viewpoints stoking a discussion around the idea that because news has little bearing on people's everyday lives, people don't need to read or watch it. I wouldn't say that I fully support this viewpoint.
There is little question that news has a significant impact on individuals . This is so that people may further improve themselves and learn a broad variety of information about all facets of everyday life from the news. People who read periodicals like The New York Times, Forbes,… for instance, have a solid understanding of the banking industry and may use this knowledge to advance their professional abilities. Therefore, reading newspapers or sticking screens to screens improves people's lives.
It is not a waste of time to read, watch, and explore the future . News reports often last for 15 to 30 minutes and daily news also contributes to netizen awareness-building . It has little impact on people's regular job or study schedules. Certain stations, for instance, will broadcast at various hours to accommodate different age groups. For instance, at 7 p.m., there will be an appropriate educational program that kids returning from school may watch to expand their knowledge without interfering with their study time. Furthermore, economic articles are often updated between 12:00 and 5:00 pm, which is convenient for office hours. This allows readers to have five minutes to understand the market and choose their next course of action.
In summary, this argument leads to the conclusion that reading news is very relevant to daily living and is not a waste of time. Thus, it facilitates people's awareness of a wide range of global events.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20664206642 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83637697868 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627306273063 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8220644577 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267776872788 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893791518411 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071856132687 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176123352992 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268223791631 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.