Some people think c, and therefore, they consider it a waste of time to read news in newspapers or watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that news is irrelevant to people’s lives, and therefore, they regard it a waste of time to read news in newspapers or watch television news programs. I strongly disagree with this statement.
Firstly, news relevance to the everyday experiences of people’s live as current affairs impacting individuals. This can be explained by the fact news also often informs readers who watch and read this news to understand the information clearly, like information, politics, travel, and beauty, business. Thus, individuals are directly affected by newspapers as they bring current affairs and events that influence daily routines. For instance, as i remember that some countries have war and wage war with America. This news is àffects in business to other countries, people can read it to people can prepare business method their company better. Thus, they do not receive money lost from the war.
Secondly, reading the news in the newspaper or watching television to listen to the news,which is not a productive use of time and they can collect some interesting information and knowledge. It can be clarified that news will post the research in the news or useful information and expand knowledge of some industry. Therefore, the reader can learn new information and knowledge that they can apply this knowledge to their life like in their study and jobs. For example, they can read news to learn new ways of cooking. Thus, they can cook new foods for the family and their family will enjoy many new foods.
Some individuals believe that news is not essential to people’s lives. Thus, they regard it a waste of time to read news in newspapers or watch television news programs. In my opinion, the news is inportant to individual’s lives, and it not waste of time to read news.
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Message: Did you mean 'wastes'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04682274247 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75777200442 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1078135554 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409643384742 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16786054565 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14254070234 0.0667982634062 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334480955592 0.151304729494 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121637220817 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.