Some people think that nowadays children have too much feeedom. What extend do younagree or disagree.
Recent days some people believe that children are enjoying more freedom than before. However, while I believe that freedom is essential in everyone's life, I strongly agree that too much freedom for children may affect their future, character, as well as childhood.
Firstly, future of a child begins from the home, school and so on, likewise, perfect future need's support and guidance from elderly people. For example, children those who have more freedom; they are not ready to listen to old age people and urge to go out of their control. It may lead to spoil their lives and destiny in somehow. Generally, parents should have limitations to their children for better future instead of giving much freedom.
Owing to the freedom children's character would change to unfriendly behavior, child delinquency, and immoral friendship. Furthermore, lack of control or free to go anywhere might change children's peer group and that would likely to have either drug addicts or such antisocial behavior. In addition, rules and regulations for the particular field of children would get a respectful human in the future.
On the other hand, childhood is the period of enjoyment and also nostalgic memories for the later life. For instance, nowadays children are more prone to get a relation with the Internet and vedio games. Failure to control over such thing's children may lose their wonderful childhood memories. Additionally, parents might think children are quiet with that as well as giving more time to play such devices would lead to not only health and behavioral problems but also their relation with earth and nature. Reduce freedom to use electronic devices then. Encourage to improve their born qualities.
In conclusion, I prefer to have freedom as enough for children, nevertheless, to control overall activities that they entertain would likely to have better generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...dy to listen to old age people and urge to go out of their control. It may lead to sp...
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...d get a respectful human in the future. On the other hand, childhood...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'likewise', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271386430678 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.129793510324 0.155533422707 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103244837758 0.0946595960268 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0648967551622 0.0501214627716 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0383480825959 0.0437548338989 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106194690265 0.122226691241 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0117994100295 0.0403226058552 29% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.60784451852 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0530973451327 0.0326793684256 162% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.047197640118 0.0861772015684 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0324483775811 0.021408717616 152% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00294985250737 0.011925033212 25% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1952.0 1933.35771543 101% => OK
No of words: 302.0 316.048096192 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.46357615894 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.400662251656 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311258278146 0.28420135186 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211920529801 0.203846283523 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129139072848 0.137316102897 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60784451852 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576158940397 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 61.9529047412 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.875 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8924550834 49.517814964 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 127.492653851 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.814263465372 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 50.0008278146 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.67088607595 1.69124875643 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137386435347 0.332605444948 41% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101906409895 0.102741220458 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0644046592813 0.0668466124924 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.551241694862 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183968729005 0.148594505496 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550060769909 0.134430193775 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503083078624 0.0742795772207 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.263271383465 0.324371583561 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0647057514498 0.0638462369009 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976881500693 0.228012699653 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428221149707 0.058150111329 74% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 5.90881763527 203% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.