Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental problems are becoming more concerned in each part of the world. Some people tend to think that raising the prize of fuel for cars or other transport system can help reduce these problems.
To begin with,there are lots of other predominant factors,which are destroying our surrondings. Take factories as an example. They are manufacturing a billion of goods every year because of competition between other companies. And this,in turns,means that they are releasing various toxic gasolin which can damage our ozone layer. By this I mean that by growing costs of vehicles,people cannot probably solve all environmental issues.
Another reason why it may not help is that demand of people in terms of cars. Despite the any prize,people will probably purchase cars as they are excellent means of transportation,which assist them to reach their destination quickly without trouble. In other words,no matter how expensive automobiles will cost,as individuals cannot live on without their existence.
Admittedly that by booming the prize of cars,we will reduce using them and purchasing expensive fuel and even driving rate could be decreased as well. To be precise, by impementing it,we can at least minimize the risk of environmental problems.
To conclude,many people are in the opinion that we should raise the cost of cars which can eradicate the problems of entire world. However,I believe that by empowering this rule,we are probably will not be able to solve all these issues owing to the other serious sources and people's demand towards the cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, so, well, at least, i mean, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34677419355 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00016258665 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616935483871 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7745730267 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212202292114 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690534687668 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640888090302 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12101848462 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677180284813 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.