Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that cars emit Carbon Dioxide into the atmosphere causing air pollution and a greenhouse effect, contributing to a global rise in temperature. There are a number of steps that can be taken to reduce the CO2 emission; however, an increase in fuel cost is just one of the ways and it is not very effective.
To begin with, vehicles are contributing approximately 25% of all Carbon Dioxide that is being released into the atmosphere every year. Increasing the price of petrol can help to reduce the environmental pollution to some degree. People with lower-income will not be able to afford expensive gasoline, and hence the number of cars on the roads will be reduced and consequently, the rate of air pollution will decrease; however, the majority of people will continue using cars. Therefore, expensive petrol will not solve environmental problems and actually will cause economic problems.
On the other hand, the government can consider different, more effective ways to address the environmental problem. Firstly, political leaders across the globe need to cooperate so that research into renewable forms of energy such as wind and solar power is adequately funded and the use of coal and gas in power stations is phased out. Secondly, by improving public transportation and reducing the cost of traveling, the government can encourage more people to use public transport; this practice can help to clean the environment and reduce traffic.
In conclusion, increasing the cost of fuel is not the best way to address the environmental problems; however, investments into the renewable energy and improvements in the efficiency y of public transportation are better alternatives that ought to be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23381294964 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06013644641 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539568345324 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4826060648 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.5 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.4 7.06120827912 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181018961622 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770808195263 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577614373558 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114483050316 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283797063756 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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