Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollutions and housing problems. To what extent do you agree to disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, environmental pollutions is not only the causes of citizen’s illness but also the main factor that created several deadly diseases. Hence, minority of individuals believe that the government should make an effort to decrease environmental issues and housing problems. From my perspective, in highly agree with the arguement and the following essay with discuss both sides and give opinion to the above debatable issue.
On the one hand, pollution recently has significantly effected the modernization and idustrialization of several countries. In particularly, the increasing of polluted areas have a substantial impact the majority on enterprises due to workers’ health and mental can not stand in such environment. As a result, the company’s process are being slowed down and the amount of workers who quite their job due to health problems are increasing. Futhurmore, although the world has went through the peak of the covid-19 pandemic, the numbers of patients are increasing sightly due to the surrounding environmental issues and climate changes around the world. In general, in the recent years, the majority of resident have several health issues the India hospitals have been out of control
On the other hand, household problems also play a essential part in the mention issue. For instance, the high density in Vietnam has caused many relative problems and surrounding polltion through out the society due to many people have low awareness and have tendency to not care about their living environment. Morevoer, many in country which tend to use gasoline vehicles have a lower air quality than countries use electric vehicles. Thus, government should legistaion, develop clean technologies, increase inhabitants awareness and reduce the density in crownded city to create a better environment.
In conclusion, government should make several solutions to solve the density issues and should increase the quality of the apmostphere. Otherwise, human could face worser pandemic and deadly desease in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in general, in particular, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55271565495 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98568753274 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2049483251 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.692307692 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176801985048 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612571205373 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536524617859 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10975666068 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596633772798 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.