Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems, people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the country side. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Indeed true, partly of resident consider that have dwelling in towns more better than rural and outskirt because capable to cope the matters of travel and vehicle in highway. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that more effective if many people stay beside the towns.
First of all, percentage of congestion will be increasing. In other words, When people prefer and decided to stay for a long time in some town the consequences is the road more congested than usual, so all of activities will interfered. Moreover, rate of accident vulnerable go up because people prompted by their activities that should be quickly finish such as working and school in the morning. For instance, Jakarta is very dense with a million inhabitants live in there, ultimately the effect is making jam for a long hours, and some of them decided to go out before the deadline like my father, he entire working at 7 a.m and he will go around 5 a.m from home because if he not do it he will late. That's why stay in outskirts and rural is the best choice to stay because in there more convenient anf far from jam.
Secondly, rate of accident will be increasing. On the other hand, beside total of accident steadily advance, population in town is very bad and many people sick because of bad weather. However, accident on town can't be avoided, on of the reason is many people spend the time on way and when someone with slighlty patient they will be appearing collisions and finally many people died. For example, America is one of the eminent country with higher salary and many people visiting this state to get some nice work until this country being very congested, when people driving vehicle on way they forget to control their speed and as a result many people became victim by this situation. Thus, every country should have regulation to prevent from bad luck.
To conclude, government should be providing works in all regions of some country, so with this able to mitigate the negative effect from jam and vehicle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
Indeed true, partly of resident consider that ...
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Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...nt consider that have dwelling in towns more better than rural and outskirt because capable...
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Line 2, column 225, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'interfere'
Suggestion: interfere
...d than usual, so all of activities will interfered. Moreover, rate of accident vulnerable ...
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Line 2, column 523, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'hour'?
Suggestion: hour
...ely the effect is making jam for a long hours, and some of them decided to go out bef...
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Line 2, column 684, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...round 5 a.m from home because if he not do it he will late. Thats why stay in outs...
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Line 2, column 704, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...e because if he not do it he will late. Thats why stay in outskirts and rural is the ...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... bad weather. However, accident on town cant be avoided, on of the reason is many pe...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...someone with slighlty patient they will be appearing collisions and finally many people died...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73011363636 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41798416133 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536931818182 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.0092544957 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.076923077 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185689723608 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690832098973 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416146840802 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107475510942 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037833419158 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.