Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Is it believed by some that the best way to teach children good manners and how to be civil in society is through their parents. Others, however, disagree and are strong believers that schools should have such responsibility.
As children, we look up to our parents for everything, and they set an example for how to be good members of society: everything we learn, we do because they teach us ever since we are born. The pros of this point of view are that parents live with the children day and night and have the possibility to show them how one is supposed to act in different contexts in public but, on the other hand, not every child has the possibility to grow up with both mother and father or have the chance to learn directly from them.
A different point of view is sustained by those who believe that this responsibility should be taken by schools: the school environment and teachers have, indeed, the potentiality to educate children on this particularly important subject that is civic education. The advantages come from the chance of sensitizing kids of all age groups while they are all together in class, during their school hours, but disadvantages may come from the possibility of them considering such subject only as a school subject to study in order to get good grades, and not paying as much attention as they should.
Personally, I believe that the best choice should be a combination of both views, with parents orienting their children toward the importance of good manners and behavior in society, and schools supporting moms and dads with dedicated hours and teachers, in order to give kids a complete education.
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...aying as much attention as they should. Personally, I believe that the best choi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82042253521 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70954536484 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9588301935 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 195.571428571 106.682146367 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.5714285714 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339223652817 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158116742411 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520256151152 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208222681424 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563915075435 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.0946893788 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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