Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Childeren are effect by their parents firstly in their home and shape by them. It is true that educational systems should each children to be good members of family but parents have main and crucial role in this way. In my opinion I think both of these groups have their particular tasks to grow up children as members of future society.
On the one hand, a child can learn every thing in his/her first years of age rapidly. Parents in these years sould notice to teach benefit and useful things that are very practical in the future. When parents educate how to face with different people and always respect eldery people, their children learn it and try to do becaaue think it is very good behaviour. Although there are most of family who teach children when are baby there are lots of parent who do not any pay attention to their children. Such parents think their child is very young and these issues are unbenefit for. So in the first step parents sould teach primary education in their home.
On the other hand, Educational systems should teach different thing in various subject to students because in the future these student can change the world by their way of thinking. Schools have heavy tasks to educate pupils numerous thing. All these subjects, issues, and cources should help students to become a person who can affect on the society. For instance, there are huge students that don’t notice to this and when grow hurm from this. Not only can they learn fundamental things from school but also they can learn how have a very good communication with other people. Hence, schools have secondary education and follow the primary educations to shape and behaive a good person.
As a result students firstly are thought by their parents and secondly in the school learn about various thing that can help them in their life when grow.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...crucial role in this way. In my opinion I think both of these groups have their p...
^
Line 2, column 442, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun parent seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of parents'.
Suggestion: lots of parents
... teach children when are baby there are lots of parent who do not any pay attention to their c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this student' or 'these students'?
Suggestion: this student; these students
...bject to students because in the future these student can change the world by their way of th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74844720497 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1971188228 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493788819876 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4133309017 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253415932814 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898765540994 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508964828781 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157921259816 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578756234042 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...crucial role in this way. In my opinion I think both of these groups have their p...
^
Line 2, column 442, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun parent seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of parents'.
Suggestion: lots of parents
... teach children when are baby there are lots of parent who do not any pay attention to their c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this student' or 'these students'?
Suggestion: this student; these students
...bject to students because in the future these student can change the world by their way of th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74844720497 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1971188228 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493788819876 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4133309017 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253415932814 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898765540994 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508964828781 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157921259816 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578756234042 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.