Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society. Others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss, what is your opinion?
The growth of one nation undoubtedly depends on various factors. While a school of thought is adamant that taxes take an optimum role in contributing to the society, others contend that the responsibility of a resident requires more. Both of the viewpoints will be elaborated in this essay before I explain why I side with the latter.
Paying taxes is a way for the government to tackle a hulk of problems. Those money would be allocated to improving the military which is for the sake of nations’ peace. Additionally, with regard to strengthening the relationship with other countries, money from the authority’s budget would be spent on diplomacy. For example, providing aid to places that are in need particularly during this current pandemic situation has been proven to be beneficial for the bond between nations. More importantly, taxes also give residents an edge on plenty of fields including using public infrastructures like hospitals. Moreover, financial support for the underprivileged or pensions for retirees are all from the welfare state.
For a nation’s prosperity and development, aside from monetary elements, moral standards of individuals are more imperative. People are responsible for improving their hometown’s image. The hospitality and cultural identity preservations of citizens would have a huge impact on that country acquiring positive reputations globally. Apart from this, laws abiding also create a superior civilisation, which could minimize the risk of one involving in illegal activities,
In conclusion, while taxes are undeniably important, individuals’ quality would be a key for any country to sustain and grow thrivingly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, then, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5546875 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25231850894 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8382944499 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15538040479 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053336790926 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426721197339 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919043022355 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245513751539 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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