Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get satisfaction in their career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Careers are one of the many aspects which define a person. Choosing a job is a challenging issue in anyone's life. Numerous people advise selecting an occupation during late adolescence and keeping it. Others however believe satisfaction comes from changing careers and trying different things. To my way of thinking, doing a single job throughout life is more beneficial. This essay will discuss my reasons.
First, the more time and effort one puts in doing something, the more skilled one becomes. Occupations, mostly at first, seem challenging and difficult. By spending more time on the task, it is readily apparent that it becomes easier. I suppose an undemanding career that one is expert at will increase the level of satisfaction. To illustrate, if a person started at a job in the early twenties and is now in his thirties, not only has ten years of experience but can also tackle obstacles. Furthermore, the experience and mastery will increase salary, as well.
The second advantage in holding on to a job is getting more familiar with its community. Every occupation has a specific group of people that one works with. If someone gets known and liked in this small society, he will make friends and enjoy spending time with them. Studies show being relatively close to people you work with will be beneficial and increase productivity. However, frequently changing jobs causes people to feel left out of the already established group of the workplace.
In conclusion, finding a satisfying career is definitely demanding. I believe in order to make this issue easier to tackle, it is important to keep doing a single work. In this way, one will find the necessary expertise needed for the job and make long-lasting friends that make working fun.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[1]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to select'.
Suggestion: to select
...in anyones life. Numerous people advise selecting an occupation during late adolescence a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, well, i suppose, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02730375427 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81023567477 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597269624573 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4647046225 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.65 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.65 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247699222548 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684529967831 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534270333941 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143965914663 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632970143218 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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