Society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?
Advertisement has long been an incredibly effective way of selling products. However, it seems that due to the harms of advertising, numerous people believe it should be banned altogether. It seems to me that although commercials have not always been constructive, they do indeed serve many purposes. They notify people of the latest goods and also have a very lucrative market. This essay will explain my reasons in detail.
Commercials are a great way to raise awareness for any brand. When shopping, it is extremely helpful to have a sufficient amount of information about the goods. Choosing a product that well fits our needs can be challenging and surely, no one likes to waste money. Advertisements are a great means of gathering some information about the latest merchandise available. Therefore, you can make sure whatever you purchase meets your standards. For example, if it is crucial for you that the beauty products you buy are not tested on animals, you can easily get that information by watching or reading about it their promotions.
Advertising is also a business that employes a lot of people. Especially nowadays, when promotion has found many ways, numerous people make has found jobs. Furthermore, not only are always jobs available but they are also incredibly fruitful. This matter helps nourish the economy of countries. To illustrate, lately, a lot of advertising agencies have been opening in Iran that promote via social media platforms. Young adults with ambitious ideas are hired and have the freedom to be creative.
In conclusion, Even though commercials must be overhauled they are still necessary in our world. They are a good source for announcements and information and they maintain careers for many. It is readily apparent that the more effort we put in, the better our advertisements become.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17785234899 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92372788858 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614093959732 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0094381193 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.15 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138869549351 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356466388202 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350070828596 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742384311344 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326042604179 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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