Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's modern times, finding jobs gradually becomes easier. Some people say that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than changing jobs in a short time and I completely agree with this opinion. This essay will highlight the reason why.
These days, numerous young people tend to switch jobs on a regular basis to gain experience. They want to find suitable work to demonstrate the skills they have learned while at the same time they can learn more in environments with different people. So that they are likely looking for something they want to look for something new, like to challenge themselves in new jobs. However, changing opportunities often carries many risks. Such as, when we are young, we can think about experiencing, but when we are adults, especially when we have a family, a stable job with a certain monthly income will be optimal for life.
On the other hand, people who choose for themselves a stable job help them have many benefits in terms of both material and spiritual values. Sticking with the job for a long time helps them have a lot of experience, and at the same time have high promotion opportunities because by doing a fixed job for a long time, people can adapt and get used to their environment work and that helps them have the ability to advance in their career with the knowledge and challenging tasks they underwent over the years. And of course, their income will also increase gradually depending on the position they have. In addition, doing a job means just having certain knowledge, it will help the brain reduce the burden and help people get out of stress.
In short, although changing jobs often brings many new experiences, it also brings a lot of risks. Instead, choosing a good job that suits us right from the start can help us settle down.
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...emonstrate the skills they have learned while at the same time they can learn more in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while, in addition, in short, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72085889571 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4477239845 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533742331288 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.2378233741 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.928571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301173400945 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10684090609 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153016130616 0.0667982634062 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212799233473 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162263340508 0.056905535591 285% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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