Some people think that people who choose a job early and
keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who
frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that a greater sense of fulfillment in career life could be attained when staying at a same job rather than switching jobs regularly. In my opinion, although job hopping could provide some benefits, I believe that being consistent with a career is more likely to help us to achieve a successful career life.
On the one hand, there are various advantages of job hopping. Firstly, employees would have a chance to try their hands at different fields, which consist of more unpredictable challenges. As a result, job satisfaction could be easily attained as they could put knowledge and experience from previous jobs into practice and receive recognition for their capabilities. Secondly, switching careers could provide more opportunities for employees to find what suits them best. For example, young people who usually dislike stable jobs or desk jobs could expose to a different working environment until they realize the aim of life.
On the other hand, there are also a lot of benefits when holding down a same job. One of the merits is that a stable career means a better job prospect. Obviously, as experience and commitment are both taken into consideration when employers are going to promote someone, a person who has stayed at one company for several years has more chances to move up the career ladder. Also, various perks could be gained for a loyal staff member such as a good pension, health insurance, holiday entitlement and a generous retirement package, which could contribute to a better living condition. Finally, they could establish a wide and steady network of partners, which enhances a better working environment due to gaining supportive long-term colleagues.
In conclusion, despite the excitement of changing jobs frequently, we would benefit more from trying to stay at a same job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83772013341 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1557120147 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.230769231 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166157565371 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650378057093 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451093604379 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11257407959 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428721668495 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.