Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success, while others believe that it depends on other factors.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, with booming advancements in society, opposing ideas have been put forward regarding whether true happiness stems from good wealth or not. This essay aims to discover both given standpoints and sheds light on why I firmly advocate the notion that not only money can bring human euphoria, but also other factors.
On the one hand, those who support the over importance of money usually emphasize its efficiency in arousing people’s satisfaction and security. This is because financial achievements are supposed to cater to all human demands, even the simplest tasks. With economic success, people are able to be financial independence, leading to personal freedom which brings people a great sense of happiness. Furthermore, it is also contended that the monetary aspect can also assist people in being more recognizable which is considered a kind of happiness. It is, irrefutable, that becoming wealthy allows people to possess more valuable assets, resulting in being standout in the crowd.
On the other hand, opponents of this approach argue that people can attain contentment from various factors, consisting of their familial affection and their inner peace. Undeniably, people seem to be happier when they can feel the intimacy and cozy atmosphere when surrounding their loved ones. The feeling of being loved is surely a catalyst to promote optimism and cheerfulness for each individual. Additionally, the peaceful feelings that might be gathered from some meaningful contributions to society can also encourage people to be more delighted. It is pointed out that while being a part of their communities, the people are likely to figure out the values of their lives.
Nevertheless, this is my view that money was conducive to pleasure, however, it is not the only factor. For example, caring the mental power and physical health is also a superior way to increase elation gradually. Therefore, in order to have a happy life, people should pursue both economic success and other accomplishments.
In conclusion, although wealth plays an indispensable role in generating happiness, people had better take other mentioned pivotal elements into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39825581395 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91738688344 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1380875128 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.0625 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180448663212 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577724022391 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631297064614 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100433076171 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448640772476 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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