Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success, while others believe that it depends on other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the happiness of live. Some people state that financial freedom is closely related to personal well-being; others believe that there have other elements could influence one’ happiness. In my view, economic is one of the factors that connects people happiness, there are many other factors could affect personal sense of happiness.
It is clear that source of happiness is inseparable the money. This is because economic success means that we have stable and sufficient income, which it enables us to afford necessities to meet basic needs, thereby feeling secure and peaceful. For example, economic success is closed related to the value we provide to others, which could make us feel that our efforts are recognized, valued and appreciated by others. Therefore, it may improve our self-fulfilment, self-satisfaction, self-esteem and confidence.
In addition, I believe that there are several crucial factors could related to personal happiness. Having a healthy body is the foundation to everything. Being physically healthy makes us less vulnerable to diseases and feel energetic, which builds a foundation for our well-being in other areas. Thus, it makes us feel at ease and enjoy life with more joy and happiness. Except for the health, the relationship is the other factor that has important impact on people well-being. This is because relationship could let people feel connected. When we have healthy relationships with friends and family members, which would allow us to share sorrow and happiness with them, and contributes to a sense of belonging and we will feel connected.
In summary, I think that all the factors mentioned above are closely related to personal happiness because no economic success could make people feel anxious about materials needs. If we did not have a good relationship, we would feel isolated and lonely. Meanwhile, an unhealthy body is hard for us to feel happy in daily life. Everyone’s definition of happiness is different, so the factors that affect happiness are different from person to person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'relate'
Suggestion: relate
...there are several crucial factors could related to personal happiness. Having a healthy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, except for, for example, i think, in addition, in summary, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34834834835 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91805990894 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522522522523 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7303797873 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9444444444 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278740094291 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926674246697 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924172011233 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192342915853 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998988343293 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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