Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people consider physical strength is more important than mental strength in sports. This essay will discuss the view point of both opinions and it will show my opinion regarding that subject.
First of all, a strong body is critically important in a particular sport as it helps the competitor to win the game and attain a good score. For example in American football if the player does not have strong muscles and a hard body, he will be hurt in the first place and will not endure until the end of the game. In the meanwhile, physical strength leads you to a healthy lifestyle.
On the other hand, mental strength is significantly important for each and every sport game. Although a strong body is important, it will not help the player to win the game without a crucial thought on how to play in a good way, for instance, the famous boxer Mohamed Ali, however he has a strong body, he was winning by tricks movements. So that we need to use our mind before doing any move.
In my opinion. I believe that mental strength is much more important than physical strength, because we should be smart and think how to play, also the agility is required in each and every sport.
In conclusion. There is an importance between the strong body and the mental strength, however, I believe that thinking and using the mentality in sports is the best way to achieve your targets not only in a sports game but also in your whole life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57915057915 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40875898032 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548262548263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.7597541016 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.818181818 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6363636364 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381131059249 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138401502601 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134620317023 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227757470123 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107864095489 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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