Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that the essential factor to be successful in sport is physical strength, while others believe that the fortitude of mind is what brings success. Although physicals attributes play an important roles, i’m of the opinion that mental strength is the profound factor that creates successful athletics.
On the one hand, it is true that physical strength is one of the visible key factors that bring one person to become successful in the sports world. As we following every sport games throughout the world, most of it involve requires advance level of physicals in controlling your body which show us how important it is for one athletics to constantly training their body to be able to maintain their physical conditions. Football, for instance, requires a huge amount of stamina as well as a strong and flexible body in order to continuously run, pass and score goals in almost 2 hours. Therefore, almost every athlete has to maintain a heavy schedule of workouts and diet to maintain their physical condition in peak conditions so that they could get the best from their performances.
On the other hand, it is the strong mind that makes the top athletes successful in their careers. Firstly, a strong mind equals an unshakeable discipline which keeps any person to follow a routine or diet, which can be easily broken without a high density of discipline. In addition, an athlete’s physical strength, which is achieved by continuous hard work, can only be maintained under the condition of a fortitude mindset which help them to only focus on their goals without being tempting by any distractions. Secondly, a strong mind benefits a person in following and bringing out the best tactics to perform. Many sport such as volleyball or basketball requires good positioning and observation in order to win the games, which can only be achieved with a cold head and a fire heart.
In conclusion, Despite the undoubtedly necessary of physicals attribute in sports, i believe a strong mind is the factor that each individuals must prioritize in order to become success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'role'?
Suggestion: role
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Message: Did you mean 'I’m'?
Suggestion: I’m
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sport seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many sports'.
Suggestion: Many sports
...inging out the best tactics to perform. Many sport such as volleyball or basketball requir...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0144092219 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81052676583 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524495677233 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.1440979422 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9166666667 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8333333333 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169149491807 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07205260824 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744078444057 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12413238073 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100511645814 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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